My first story from Psypokes......................

[knotom]

Chapter 1

It was just another average school day for Aidan Rood. Aiden was a tall, smart and handsome boy whose many interests included games, computers, and most importantly girls. Just as he started to read Romeo & Juliet, his teacher shouted” Aidan go to the Principal’s Office.” “Now” . Aidan quickly rushed out of the classroom and shut the door, but as soon as he shut the door, the floor beneath him opened up and swallowed him.

A few moments later, he woke up on a huge red leather sofa. Aiden felt dizzy, it was just like he had just had brain surgery, due to the fall.”Oh, my head” exclaimed Aiden.
“Hello. I’m Agent X” said the man gruffly; he was wearing a black suit which he wore with a small black tie and a white shirt.
“You Guys and your names” said Aiden sarcastically.”Where’s John?”
“I’m here, Aiden. You may go Agent X” replied John. John was a bald, tall and thin man, he was wearing an old grey suit with a ripped black tie. He was also drinking some tea or coffee it was difficult to tell witch one he was drinking. Although Aiden knew he had a taste for tea.
Then Agent X rushed quickly out of the room as if he had something important to do. “Now”. Then he took a small pause.”Aiden, I need you to do something for me”

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Chapter 2 One More

“What do you want me to do now?”
“Ok, well. I wonder if you could do one more mission before you leave the KSF.”
“No Way” said Aiden moving his hand in disagreement.”We both agreed that I would do no more missions, remember I’m giving up the spy business.”
“Just one more, please, ooh come on. I am begging you” said John, on his knees.
“Oh ok, then” replied Aiden in guilt.
“Yes, I knew you would” said John triumphantly” Good I’ll start briefing you now”.
“What do you want me to do now?”
“Ok, well. I wonder if you could do one more mission before you leave the KSF.”
“No Way” said Aiden moving his hand in disagreement.”We both agreed that I would do no more missions, remember I’m giving up the spy business.”
“Just one more, please, ooh come on. I am begging you” said John, on his knees.
““What do you want me to do now?”
“Ok, well. I wonder if you could do one more mission before you leave the KSF.”
“No Way” said Aiden moving his hand in disagreement.”We both agreed that I would do no more missions, remember I’m giving up the spy business.”
“Just one more, please, ooh come on. I am begging you” said John, on his knees.
“Oh ok, then” replied Aiden in guilt.
“Yes, I knew you would” said John triumphantly” Good I’ll start briefing you now.Sit down. Oh, right you’re already sitting down aren’t you?”

“What do you think?” said Aiden quietly.
“Let’s get to business then, now your mission is a protection job” exclaimed John professionally.
“What, what a protection job can’t your agents handle it?” said Aiden angrily.
“All our other agents are busy, besides you’re the best man or should I say the best boy for the job. If you don’t mind me saying”.
“Well thanks for saying I am the best man for the job.” said Aiden proudly “What about Agent X?
“He’s busy” said John.”Anyway let’s get back on track.”
“Your mission is high priority one; your mission is to protect the Princess of France” said John proudly with prestige.”We believe a gang of highly professional criminals are after her. You must protect her at all costs.”
“So, I have to protect some brat” said Aiden with great distastefulness.
“Yes” replied John firmly.”Now, she is staying at the Grodno hotel, she is visiting the UK for a holiday. Oh, and take this.” John gave Aiden a wrist watch; well it looked like a wrist watch, but Aiden knew it was more than that, much more.
“What it is, dare I ask?” asked Aiden.
“Well it’s got a phone, a satellite TV and a radio.”
“Huh, well that’s cool” said Aiden in glee.
“Well Ta-ta” said John.
“What?” asked Aiden.
A large glass tube came down from the ceiling and came crashing on Aiden. Aiden was trapped in the glass tube. He started banging his knuckles on the glass but before he could say anything he was instantly whisked away. Before he knew it he was on a cold, hard, concrete floor. A few metres he could see the Grodno Hotel.

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CHAPTER 3

Aiden stood up. “Stupid transporter” he said while brushing off the dirt from his T-shirt. Aiden walked slowly to the entrance. He entered the building slowly and quietly. As soon as he walked in there he could see many portraits, old and new. The hotel was alive with classical music. Aiden walked up to reception.
“Hello” said the receptionist.
“Hello, here” Aiden said, while showing the receptionist his ID.
"Oh, Ok. Room 42, floor 2”said the receptionist kindly.
“Thanks” said Aiden kindly.
Aiden walked up the gold plated stairs, he knew they weren’t really gold plated; no hotel would spend their money on gold plated stairs. As he got closer to room 42, the classical music got louder and louder, he thought that sounds like Beethoven. Ah, Beethoven was a great classical music conductor, while he was one of the best ones, but Aiden did not know too much about other aspects of his life.

Aiden was finally there. He wondered what the princess would be like, cute, ugly or a rich brat. He entered the room, the room was alive with classical music, what kind of princess would like classical music.
“Jeeves, please turn down zee music, now!!!”
“Hello” said Aiden
“Hello” said a girl in a white bathrobe holding a toothbrush, in a French accent.”You must be zee nincompop zat my father hired to protect me”
“Excuse me, princess, I need to go outside” said Aiden.
“You may go” said the Princess.
“Thanks”. Aiden walked out and pressed his watch.”John, John, can hear me?”
“Yes, Aiden”
“Can you please tell me why you got me protecting a brat” asked Aiden.
“I already explained to you, why” said John. “Any way I shall be sending another agent to help you with this mission, she will be there in 2 minutes or so, so wait near the entrance for the agent.”
“What?” Aiden asked, but before John could reply he cut himself off.”Grr” thought Aiden because he didn’t need another agent to share the glory, when he his completed the mission.

Aiden decided to take the elevator instead of the stair to get downstairs. He came out of the elevator, Aiden could hear classical music again, it appeared that the princess had started listening again, but this time the music was different, it had a sort of pop-classical music mix. Aiden quickly ran to the entrance and waited outside.
A few minutes later, a black car arrived. Slowly, a tall, thin woman walked out of it. She was strolling towards Aiden, she was a vision of loveliness; a vision of beauty, she was perfect. She was, she was……”Hello, there” said the lady.
“Hello, hello. What’s all this then?” said Aiden staring at her.
“Sorry, I didn’t catch that. What did you say?”
“Oh. Don’t worry about what I said” he said in embarrassment.
“Now, I presume you’re Aiden, aren’t you?” asked the women.
“Err, yeah I’m Aiden” said Aiden.”Eh, how old are you”.
“What?, well I’m 17, which is totally off topic, shall we go inside” said the lady.
“Ok let’s go” said Aiden under his breath” It may just work out I’m 15 and she’s 17.

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CHAPTER 4
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Aiden and the lady were finally upstairs in the Princess room, they were awaiting the arrival of a limo. Beep Beep went something, it was Aiden’s watch.
“Hello” Aiden said.
“The cab is waiting outside” John said.
“Oi, Princess, let’s go and you too Elizabeth” Aiden said to the princess and the lady, as he was switching off the phone on his watch and putting on his coat.

They decided to take the elevator since the cab would not be there long. The elevator was a nice bronze finish, it even had some music playing and Aiden could see a touch screen which allowed you to play your favourite tracks. Ding went the elevator, they were there. Aiden, Elizabeth and the Princess went outside to greet the cab.


An old posh-looking man opened the door for the trio. The trio went inside the cab, the cab was more a limo than a cab, it had champagne, a T.V., and it had spacious room. “Coooooooooooolll” Aiden said with almost childish-like glee. The cab was driving along Adams Street; it was a nice, quiet street, where many nice residents lived.

Boom!!!

Before Aiden knew he was on the floor. He woke up. He could hear the sound of an ambulance. He saw the Princess. He rushed to her scene. She was alive. Thank goodness. Then Aiden thought of Elizabeth. Where was she? Was she alright? There she was, she looked helpless. Aiden ran like the wind. She was alright. “Hello, please come, Adams Street” Aiden said into his phone. A dark, black creature appeared a few metres in front of Aiden. He dropped the phone in fear. Smash. The creature was approaching Elizabeth. “Back away, I’ve got a gun.” Aiden shouted. The creature approached faster and faster. He shot the gun in the air two times, soon the creature fled the scene. What was that? Where did it go?

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CHAPTER 5
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A few minutes later, Aiden found himself in a hospital sitting next to Elizabeth and beside Elizabeth was the bratty but rich princess. Elizabeth's face looked like she was in pain, she was helpless, she was vunerable. His thoughts laid with her as he went to find the doctor. He walked down the cold hallway, he could hear many patients moaning and groaning. There were doctors and nurses all along the hallway, the doctors weere wearing the tradinational lab coats while the nurses, they were wearing their standard uniforms.

"Doctor, doctor. Excuse Me" Aiden shouted at the Doctor." Is she going to be alright?"

"Well, the princess, she's going to be fine, but" He took a slight pause. Elizabeth, she well..." He stumbled again. "May have brain damage and I mean permanent."

Aiden gasped in terror, if she had brain damage she may not remember the agency and most importantly him. She would be gone, just gone. She would lose her mystic, her aroma. She would lose almost everthing that she was.

"How long till we know?" he questioned, worringly.

"Hmm." He thought for a minute." 2- 3 Days."

Aiden started to almost cry with saddness and despair.

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CHAPTER 6

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The air was full of sadness and tears.

Aiden was snoring, it was like a bear rampaging. Aiden woke up because he could hear Elizabeth groaning, he could see her eyelids opening slowly and weakly.

"Eli...Eliz". Then he stumbled."Elizabeth".

He ran for the doctor.

A few hours later....

"Well looks like the Princess and errm Mary can go" said the doctor with uncertaintecy.

Aiden walked out of the sickness-bearing hosipital, which was covered in bacteria and viruses.

Boom!!!

What was that?

"Get in the car" said Aiden in fear. "I SAID GET IN THE CAARRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!

Elizabeth started to cry as soon as she entered the car, the Princess simply gave an annoyed grunt, she was like a bull aiming at a red towel.

"Take them to the airport, ok?" said Aiden to the driver. "Don't stop, for anything. GO!!!"

The taxi drove of into the distance, into the sunset which was a nice orange colour.

[Stick]

thats long.
I didnt have the time to read it, I stopped around the 2nd paragraph.
But it looks good