Post by tmntyoshi on Nov 26, 2007 21:43:36 GMT -5
here is the prologue and first chapter for a fan fic I also posted on nintendo city. Nintendo city.com will get all of the chapters first but I won't forget to post here. ;D
PROLOGUE
Or something like that.
BROOKLYN: A pair of normal brothers that had a small plumbing business got ready for a date with their girl friends. These normal bros. were Mario and Luigi who owned a small plumbing and carpentry business. They were off to a diner. Five minutes later they met pauline and daisy. They ate a meal of pasta and finished. The brothers went home, knowing they had a plumbing job tomorrow, daisy drove home and Pauline walked. On her way home she heard unexplainable noises coming from an alleyway. She was extremely startled at first. "Hello?" she replied hesitantly towards the darkness of the alleyway. "I said hello" she repeated nearing the darkness.
No answer. She tried to reply "Is anyone there" but a huge fuzzy fist grabbed her head and reeled her into the alley way. It was almost impossible to hear her muffled screams close up. She quickly grabbed her cell phone from her pocket and dialed the brother's number.
The phone rang. The phone rang again. " get it luigi " Mario sleepily called out. The phone rang again. Luigi must've been sleeping mario thought in his bed. the phone rang a last time- and Mario grabbed it. "Hello?" he asked. No answer. "Weird, why are people callin' this late at night!?" mario asked himself.He checked the caller ID for the last person to call. It was pauline. Mario went back to sleep. A magic was falling over the planet. A magic that the brothers would soon discover.
CHAPTER 1.....THE MAGIC BEGINS
Mario woke up earlier than Luigi by a couple of minutes. He had much time to Get his suit of overalls and hard shoes on. By the time Luigi got up mario was putting on his shoes.
Mario thought to himself about how his feet felt really funny afterwards but never talked about it; it wasn’t annoying or different enough for him to.
“Ready for the job?” Luigi asked as mario got his tools ready for plumbing. “Yeah, when am I not?” Mario replied professionally. Ten minutes later they left. It wasn’t a busy day for traffic mario noticed while nearing fallen over caution cones on the road. He decided he could cut through the city. The brothers were on the streets and exchanged ideas of why no one was around except for some cops. Then they saw.
A skyscraper had half of its glass smashed off, showing plain metal floors. Which was odd; they usually weren’t that thick. The beams weren’t there either, it was just being held up. The metal was a reddish color as well, but not rusting. Very suspicious the brothers thought to themselves. At that moment Mario heard Pauline's scream from the top of the skyscraper. Mario told Luigi to get out, that they were saving pauline.
They ran past the cops who shouted at them, the sky darkened though it was in the morning, soon the surroundings of mario were nothing but a black background as he jumped onto the first platform. Luigi hadn’t made it. But now all he could think of was jumping. Part of his brain was thinking of how this was weird, especially since ladders were hanging around, which he hadn’t noticed before.
He leaped over to the first ladder and climbed it. A barrel flew at him and he soared over it. He repeated this until about half way up, there he saw a huge turtle. “WOAH!” Mario yelped as it ran towards him. He wondered how a huge snapping turtle got here, then he noticed its peculiarly rounded shell, tall large oval eyes and plain perfectly cylindar-like feet and legs. It shocked him so much that he reached for his tools, but the only one left was his hammer. As it started fading, he grabbed it and swung it at the huge turtle.
The hammers handle rounded almost perfectly, so it was odd, the head got humongous too. He smashed the turtle with it and couldn’t stop! he was swing it over his head and back again. He smashed a few barrels and then reached the top. “Pauline!” Mario shouted. Then he saw it, the huge brown two ton ape. It roared and threw a barrel at him. He quickly jumped over it bringing him closer to this ignoramus monkey. “It’s hammer time” mario whispered just loud enough for the ape to hear it.
He smashed its face with the hammer and as it fell into the darkness he said “can’t touch this.” The blackness faded but Pauline did too. Mario leaped his last super leap towards her-and she was gone. forever? perhaps. He would have to wait. He saw a crowd of people around him. Millions, somehow not witnessing his triumph, but just knowing. Maybe, they were the darkness when he was fighting? He would never know. Someone asked what’s your name? And he replied “Mario”
“That's it?” the fan asked seeming disappointed.
“No, It’s SUPER mario!” he answered triumphantly.
It took awhile but the brothers got home in time to get to bed. “Hey we missed that job today” Luigi said to mario from his bed. “We’ll get him tomorrow.” mario replied sleepily. And that’s what they did.
Sorry about the lame pun like "It's hammer time" and "Can't touch this" but it seemed cool at the time and i dont feel like changing it. lol
PROLOGUE
Or something like that.
BROOKLYN: A pair of normal brothers that had a small plumbing business got ready for a date with their girl friends. These normal bros. were Mario and Luigi who owned a small plumbing and carpentry business. They were off to a diner. Five minutes later they met pauline and daisy. They ate a meal of pasta and finished. The brothers went home, knowing they had a plumbing job tomorrow, daisy drove home and Pauline walked. On her way home she heard unexplainable noises coming from an alleyway. She was extremely startled at first. "Hello?" she replied hesitantly towards the darkness of the alleyway. "I said hello" she repeated nearing the darkness.
No answer. She tried to reply "Is anyone there" but a huge fuzzy fist grabbed her head and reeled her into the alley way. It was almost impossible to hear her muffled screams close up. She quickly grabbed her cell phone from her pocket and dialed the brother's number.
The phone rang. The phone rang again. " get it luigi " Mario sleepily called out. The phone rang again. Luigi must've been sleeping mario thought in his bed. the phone rang a last time- and Mario grabbed it. "Hello?" he asked. No answer. "Weird, why are people callin' this late at night!?" mario asked himself.He checked the caller ID for the last person to call. It was pauline. Mario went back to sleep. A magic was falling over the planet. A magic that the brothers would soon discover.
CHAPTER 1.....THE MAGIC BEGINS
Mario woke up earlier than Luigi by a couple of minutes. He had much time to Get his suit of overalls and hard shoes on. By the time Luigi got up mario was putting on his shoes.
Mario thought to himself about how his feet felt really funny afterwards but never talked about it; it wasn’t annoying or different enough for him to.
“Ready for the job?” Luigi asked as mario got his tools ready for plumbing. “Yeah, when am I not?” Mario replied professionally. Ten minutes later they left. It wasn’t a busy day for traffic mario noticed while nearing fallen over caution cones on the road. He decided he could cut through the city. The brothers were on the streets and exchanged ideas of why no one was around except for some cops. Then they saw.
A skyscraper had half of its glass smashed off, showing plain metal floors. Which was odd; they usually weren’t that thick. The beams weren’t there either, it was just being held up. The metal was a reddish color as well, but not rusting. Very suspicious the brothers thought to themselves. At that moment Mario heard Pauline's scream from the top of the skyscraper. Mario told Luigi to get out, that they were saving pauline.
They ran past the cops who shouted at them, the sky darkened though it was in the morning, soon the surroundings of mario were nothing but a black background as he jumped onto the first platform. Luigi hadn’t made it. But now all he could think of was jumping. Part of his brain was thinking of how this was weird, especially since ladders were hanging around, which he hadn’t noticed before.
He leaped over to the first ladder and climbed it. A barrel flew at him and he soared over it. He repeated this until about half way up, there he saw a huge turtle. “WOAH!” Mario yelped as it ran towards him. He wondered how a huge snapping turtle got here, then he noticed its peculiarly rounded shell, tall large oval eyes and plain perfectly cylindar-like feet and legs. It shocked him so much that he reached for his tools, but the only one left was his hammer. As it started fading, he grabbed it and swung it at the huge turtle.
The hammers handle rounded almost perfectly, so it was odd, the head got humongous too. He smashed the turtle with it and couldn’t stop! he was swing it over his head and back again. He smashed a few barrels and then reached the top. “Pauline!” Mario shouted. Then he saw it, the huge brown two ton ape. It roared and threw a barrel at him. He quickly jumped over it bringing him closer to this ignoramus monkey. “It’s hammer time” mario whispered just loud enough for the ape to hear it.
He smashed its face with the hammer and as it fell into the darkness he said “can’t touch this.” The blackness faded but Pauline did too. Mario leaped his last super leap towards her-and she was gone. forever? perhaps. He would have to wait. He saw a crowd of people around him. Millions, somehow not witnessing his triumph, but just knowing. Maybe, they were the darkness when he was fighting? He would never know. Someone asked what’s your name? And he replied “Mario”
“That's it?” the fan asked seeming disappointed.
“No, It’s SUPER mario!” he answered triumphantly.
It took awhile but the brothers got home in time to get to bed. “Hey we missed that job today” Luigi said to mario from his bed. “We’ll get him tomorrow.” mario replied sleepily. And that’s what they did.
Sorry about the lame pun like "It's hammer time" and "Can't touch this" but it seemed cool at the time and i dont feel like changing it. lol